Well, im quite sure yvela is involved on this… But, you know what? I dont care!! The plot has been sooo boring for the last few chaps, sooo aimless that i couldnt care less… Was about to throw the towel with yesterdays chap having bjorn finding another effing diary (which btw was a nothing burguer).
And now Bjorns plan was so nonsensical, that makes me think (again) that the aithor doesnt care about quality or retconing himself, at the moment of streching the story by whatever means. Doesnt care about hurting the pacing of the story, character motivations or anything! He knows more chapters is more money… “So lets strech this b*tch until people stops caring about the story and, when no one is reading this thing due to utter boredom, then lets put a stop to it in whatever way possible without caring if it makes sense, if it feels rushed or unfullfilling… Who would care at that point!!?”Seriously… The culprit could have an essence like amelia to clone him/herself, could have plenty of agility and be fast enough to untie him/herself kill everyone (or some) with neck stabs, poison or explosives ( to mention a few ways) and then run. Bjorn is not a fast runner, damn he says so himself on this chapter…So… What was de fucking plan? leave everyone loosely tied up and leave a ways off, then wait for a few days without changing the hidding spot… Wot???What about sensing skills? no one has those to sense that bjorn is crouching in the bushes like a kid playing hide and seek? Should be pretty comon for few explorers to have skills like that…What about missalining trust? on earlier arcs eeeeveryone had one of those… Heck! even bjorn has one! Which ofc is conveniently dischatged, cause dumbo here didnt recharge it when on the city while PREPARING to enter the labyrinth…The author just wants to insert this murder/mistery plot without the skill to back it up, because potato!!!GEEZ LOUISE! MAKE IT MAKE SENSE!!!!
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