Also this new format is stupid. Please change it back to the other one. We canโt re edit our posts or create spacing for smoother sentence structure. Going to double check again.
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We now have a series of meetups pending: Village Chief with a long overdue explanation, Ragna from her coma, now Ravien with her reveal, the surviving Anabada members, the players in Ghostbusters (with a possible round table revival), and lastly, Gavis and the Witch.So the Witch, Reatlas, and Gavis know Bjorn is the man of fate – I wonder if the King knows as well, since he is also a major player (faction leader, not Evil Spirit player)
Is it just me or are there some weird clerical/grammatically errors in this chapter.โFirst, there was me, Aynar, and Misha.Add the five members of Arminโs Adventuring Group, and we had nine people in total.โHow does that make 9? Even if this is an exact translation I would clean that up.Or thisโฆโSince a new island had appeared on the sixth floor, bringing a navigator was no longer optional.โShouldn’t it be, NOT bringing a navigator was no longer optional. ?Other than that nothing really to say about whatโs going on. The navigator will likely run with Armins crew and everyone will go with Bjorn. They will likely speed run to the 6th floor.
I think bringing a navigator is no longer optional, implies that it is mandatory.For the counting I think armin plus 5 members and it adds upAnd for me the last few chapters felt all like build up and we got questions over question but no answers.
trevor was right about this “First, there was me, Aynar, and Misha.Add the five members of Arminโs Adventuring Group, and we had nine people in total”, It should have been 8 then after getting a navigator their numbers increased to nine
All this labyrinth talk about going to the first underground floor and Bjorn still hasnt thought about the fact that he is banned from entering there. I wonder how he will fix that. Maybe the island on the 6th floor will be the actual destination?
Yeah it wonโt let me create separate paragraphs. All those extra periods are supposed to be their own separate lines. We also canโt reply or up/down vote.
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